|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Liquid Magnifications
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 08:29:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
|
Tears enlarge life's wounds;
zooming in closely to pain,
wet, transparent scars
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-01-02 20:29:16] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Liquid Magnifications
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 03:46:41 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
The black sun does it again!
Perfectly perceptive...
Nice one Heidi x
Star x x x |
|
|
Re: Liquid Magnifications
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 07:52:29 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Brutally painful, this. And such an eloquent and creative way of putting it. Excellent haiku.
Seléne ~ |
|
|
Re: Liquid Magnifications
(User Rating: 1 ) by windowguy on
Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 11:54:26 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
An interesting perspective.Potent thoughts. Well done. |
|
|
|