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Song
Contributed by
ChaosFactor
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Saturday, 2nd January 2010 @ 08:06:07 PM in AEST
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Verse 1
I woke up crying again last night,
Wondering what I did to cause this stupid fight.
And there's nothing I can do but just lay here in bed,
Awake remembering all the things you said:
Chorus 1
"You hurt me; you hate me. I can't ever tell
If living with you will be heaven or hell.
And all that I wish for is the day that you'd see
That I just want to love you as much as you need me."
Verse 2
I started to wonder why nothing was right,
Why I haven't been able to sleep through the night.
I could finally see and reached beside my bed,
Picked up the phone and called you and said:
Chorus 2
"You hurt me; you hate me. I can't ever tell
If being with you will be heaven or hell.
And all that I wish for is the day that you'd see,
That I just want to love you as much as you love me.
Bridge
Boy, come home I know just what to do.
Seems all this time what was missing was you.
Please just forgive me and I'll promise today
That I'll try my hardest so that you'll never say:
Chorus 1
'You hurt me; you hate me. I can't ever tell
If living with you will be heaven or hell.
And all that I wish for is the day that you'd see
That I just want to love you as much as you need me.'"
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Re: Song
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 01:10:01 PM AEST
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Hey it's not bad, lot better than i could write that's for sure.
Take care
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Re: Song
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 02:17:15 PM AEST
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Well well! You never cease to amaze me!!
This is actually really good, i've got a tune in my head already!
I'm very new to poetry, & still finding my feet, but a lyricist I have a;lways been, & absolutely love making music!
The title is in there already, it doesn't need to be a lyric from the song, look at it again, & you'll realise what it is x
If you've got more, i'd really like to hear them!
Good job! Lisa x x x |
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