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i've been miserable without you
Contributed by
RuMPleStiLTSkiN
on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 05:22:27 AM in AEST
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i'M tired of faking happiness ..
tired of not filling this emptiness ..
cause ever since you left .. my life is in complete mess ..
i'm miserable without you ..
i have to confess ..
i did you wrong .. i broke all my promises ..
it's been so long .. since i last felt your tenderness ..
i got no reason to hold on .. got no reason to be strong ..
... unless ...
you forgive me .. make me feel the way that i just miss ..
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2010-01-01 05:22:27]
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Re: i've been miserable without you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 05:39:52 AM AEST
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Remorse is a powerful emotion
whats written here doesn't seem pathetic as we usually are
when we realize we made a mistake
It feels deeply sincere
so much that it brought a smile to my heart
you captured the true essence of what it is to need that someone
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Re: i've been miserable without you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 08:46:38 AM AEST
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Rarely do we realize what we have until it is gone. Your poem illustrates this perfectly. but there is hope in the lesson that we, as humans, can evolve; can learn; can benefit from mistake. Though it's true we can never gain ground in the past, we can use our experience for future promise and reward. Very sad post. But there is hope, even in this. Take care.
Seléne ~ |
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