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love lost ring
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 01:36:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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~ loves lost ring~
Seen hard men fall upon the ground
they lay hearts beating lost love gone
from that they found now pain none
that can compare took them down
place never been in this ring before
that fight all now gone one punch
broke there soul heart lost in the
ring of lost souls bleed the pain
never such as before now lay
beaten love lost broken down
upon ground they lay bleeding
heart lost that fight no return
for you now loves lost ring
~ loves lost ring~
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Fuzzy
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2009-12-31 13:36:03]
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Re: love lost ring
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 08:40:00 PM AEST
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your pain is evident, fuzzy. I hope that these writings are cathartic for you. There is a torture between the lines that stabs the heart in this. Greatly emotive.
Seléne ~ |
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Re: love lost ring
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by thistle_and_fern on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 03:21:36 PM AEST
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"Bleed the pain", funny how that is exactly how it feels, that we bleed from the pain of hurt and heart break. And I guess to be fair, our heart does bleed from being broken, our soul torn apart.
Well wrtten, stabbed my heart as I relived my hurt.
Julie |
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