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at sea
Contributed by
anders
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Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 10:41:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I see the stars,
and along with them comes you,
all the light appears,
yeah, and then comes you.
I see you float,
you dance from cloud to cloud,
you dance from moon to moon,
yeah, and I see you.
And then you glance,
you glance right down at me,
and I am stuck at sea,
yeah way down here at sea.
And you reach down,
and I reach up for you,
and everything is new,
yeah and I'm back with you.
But I wake up,
and I am still at sea,
still down here, stranded at sea.
and you up there without me,
yeah, up there dancing without me.
Copyright ©
anders
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2009-12-30 22:41:40]
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Re: at sea
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:02:32 PM AEST
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There is a perfectly balanced emotion in this. A sadness. A very deep sadness that cannot be consoled. But so completely beautiful. It's like holding onto something you know will hurt. You really have no choice. Lovely melancholy.
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Re: at sea
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by longhaircg on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 06:07:37 AM AEST
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very beautifully written, real love never dies
we just put away in a safe place
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