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Confessions of a Thief
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deadwriter
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Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 06:18:21 PM in AEST
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Confessions of a Thief
Events have been set into place
To take me to the end of the race
When you know it is your time to die
Always there springs up the question, why?
For me the question was always, when?
Because there are things I need to do before then
Though I have always tried to do things right
Within me there has been this endless fight
You say, who cares, you are a thief, and you deserve what you get
I have not given up the right to have you pass judgment yet
That will come when they finally lay me in my grave
Perhaps another life then you will be able to save
As I close and say my final farewell
You ask, what did I steal to put me through such Hell
I took something so precious that I knew was not mine from the start
I stole your amazingly beautiful Heart
Deadwriter
12/30/2009
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Re: Confessions of a Thief
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:18:22 PM AEST
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I was unsure what to expect from the beginnings of this, but that ending really touched me. The heart continually overrides the head does it not? We are helpless. Completely helpless. This was an excellent piece.
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Re: Confessions of a Thief
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:56:02 PM AEST
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very well written.
Take care
Fuzzy.
As I close and say my final farewell
You ask, what did I steal to put me through such Hell
I took something so precious that I knew was not mine from the start
I stole your amazingly beautiful Heart
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Re: Confessions of a Thief
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 01:11:22 AM AEST
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WoW ... i liked it alotttt
it's really a very good impressive .. feelings arousing poem .. though in this poem you indicate your self as a thief .. i find my self helplessly compassionate with you ..
that was excellent .. i loved it .. keep it up .. |
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Re: Confessions of a Thief
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 03:04:17 PM AEST
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| This is an excellent poem. I'll send my books to you as soon as I can |
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Re: Confessions of a Thief
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by inkmaster on
Thursday, 7th January 2010 @ 08:41:41 AM AEST
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This is a great read...It takes a thief to understand a thief...Well written...I enjoyed it..Thanks for sharing...
Inkmaster |
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Re: Confessions of a Thief
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 22nd January 2010 @ 10:13:43 AM AEST
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What an amazing write. We are all thieves in one way or another. This was beautifully written my friend. Talk to you soon.
Rich |
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