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Death
Contributed by
ChaosFactor
on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 10:15:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What if I want to die?
Is it ok if I don’t want to try?
Please let me go, please set me free;
There’s nothing I can do so get away from me.
You’re killing me; I can’t breathe.
Can’t someone just help me please?
I hate my life and it’s all my fault.
I just wish you knew you’re all I’ve sought.
I loved you once and I love you still;
God knows I probably always will.
But I’m meant to be alone, though no one sees
That the one who’s fault that is is me.
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2009-12-30 10:15:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 12:20:18 PM AEST (User
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This is well written, the last line is very open.
We all make mistakes that sometimes we're not willing to admit to.
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