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.. LiFe ..
Contributed by
rumplestiltskin
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Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 02:12:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i Take a look at the life i left behind .. and a flashback goes through my mind ..
of memories that's kept inside .. feelings that's been put aside ..
i search for happiness .. laughter ...
found Nothing but Pain .. and misery .. the same feelings that did alter ..
the way i am ..... My Character ..
that did become my enemies long after ..
i search within sad memories .. i read the blood written diaries ..
i seek trough the shredded galleries ..
just to see your face .. your smile ..
but it seemed like you're wearing a mask .. hiding the truth for a while ..
hiding behind the face of an angel .. attracting me ..
closer and closer i try to be .. deeper and deeper the pain turned out to be ..
i take a look at the life i have ahead .. with all these plans inside my head ..
wondering if i would ever be lead .. to the feelings that i never felt ..
hoping this is the last tear i'll have to shed .. before i ever leave this life ... dead ..
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2009-12-30 02:12:51]
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Re: .. LiFe ..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 12:47:50 PM AEST
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I loved it!
from opening to ending it reminded me of another n nameless poet... |
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Re: .. LiFe ..
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 12:56:22 PM AEST
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Such pain and heartbreak....
You've conveyed these feelings here so well, remember hope is a very powerful thing x
Star x x x |
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Re: .. LiFe ..
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 02:19:15 AM AEST
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What a wonderfully intricate
colaaboration of words, ideas,truth
The further along you read
the more you realize
how deeply enticed you are
Truly superior and captivating
-D.Truth |
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Re: .. LiFe ..
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by Forever89 on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 08:26:14 PM AEST
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| wow... that was awesome!! |
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