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Mental Beatings
Contributed by
Jammy
on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 10:52:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The little things you do
Make me go crazy.
A glance in my direction.
Kills me inside.
A smile.
Rips out my heart.
A hello.
Breaks it in two.
It kills me inside.
Because I know I can't have you.
You won't let me in.
You are leading me on.
Pretending.
Faking.
Lying.
Every little thing you do
Destroys me.
A nudge.
Kicks me in the side.
A hug.
Punches me in the face.
A conversation.
Leaves me unconscience.
A goodbye.
Puts me in the ground.
Copyright ©
Jammy
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2009-12-29 22:52:07]
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Re: Mental Beatings
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by fallensaint on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 11:26:54 PM AEST
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well i took the time to read it and i say that it is a really great write.
and i can relate.
take care
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Re: Mental Beatings
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 12:02:38 AM AEST
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I agree this is a very good write, feel for you.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Mental Beatings
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by ChaosFactor on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 10:23:26 AM AEST
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| This is incredibly well written.. And I can relate. Keep writing and take care. |
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Re: Mental Beatings
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:58:45 PM AEST
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Why do you say it isn't that good ??
well i guess it's quite impressive .. speaks out what u have in there .. and that's what writing is all about :)
tc my friend .. |
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Re: Mental Beatings
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by Sexygirl on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 01:32:32 AM AEST
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| I think we all have experienced those feelings in one way or another.I think that you captured the emotions in our every day life.I mean when someone can't see how much they have hurt you with a word,sometimes it really makes you feel this way.Now that I rambled on like this... I am looking forward to more writes from you...well done. |
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