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The loss of Two

Contributed by alovelyescape on Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 08:39:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It felt so perfect, it felt like forever
When we were together, it felt unbreakable
Like an invisible force, melding us together.
It was true love, that’s unmistakable.

I don’t know what happened, we hadn’t pulled through,
I didn’t think I could love someone other than you
But I did, I fell hard, for a boy in the hall.
The first time I wanted him, alone at the mall.
I needed him then, cause you weren’t there.
When I needed you most, you didn’t care.

You complained and you blamed, it was always my fault.
What did you provide? An emotional assault.
I left you for him, I thought he was better.
He made me so happy, so I wrote you the letter.
The truth, is what you asked, I gave you my answer.
The hurt in your eyes, was my deadliest cancer.

I hurt you, I loved you, you wanted me then,
But I was with him, the one who’d I depend.
You were lost for a bit, you’re life a turnover.
You saw me with him, and knew it was over.
I wanted you baby, I missed your touch.
Though with this topic, I could not say much.
I kept it to myself, my missing you pain.
Not leaving you behind, cause you kept me sane.

A short while after, I realised my mistake.
I left you for someone, when you were mine to take.
While being with someone else, what I really wanted was you.
I spent time thinking this through, of what I could do.
I couldn’t be with him, when I’m slowly losing you.

I tried winning you back, I tried calling you out,
I tried asking your forgiveness, I tried not to shout.
I needed you back, that much was clear,
But you’re happier this way, was my worst of fears.

So I hurt the one who cared, and lost the one I’d shun.
All you could say, was that we had our fun.
Wasn't it more than that? Was it just a game to you?
Now I can see, how I had lost two.

Copyright Â© alovelyescape ... [ 2009-12-29 20:39:13]
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Re: The loss of Two (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 01:59:41 PM AEST
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When two become none, it's very confusing, and almost unbearable....
A well composed write x
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