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Slowly........Slowly
Contributed by
Nyliah00
on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 02:13:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Slowly Slowly
she slips away
right back into
the black abyss
She's all alone
heart a chunk of ice
eyes without a soul.
where it all went
wrong she'll never know
time is lost
she can't replace it.
Slowly Slowly
she loses herself
her mind is blank
her heart has an
empty void.
In a few months
her body will become
an empty shell
dull and lifeless
like a dead leaf
on the road.
Slowly slowly
the smile upon
her once cheerful
face becomes a
defiant frown.
Her bright personality
was traded in for one
that has been to hell
and back.
Slowly slowly
she becomes uncaring
unaffectionate
unwanted
friends can't stand
her dark aura it
only brings them down.
Family do not want her
around because she cannot
live up to their standards
Slowly slowly
people become uncaring
unaffectionate
unwilling to find the heart
to stay by her side.
so she fades
fades into the darkness
fades into depression
there is only one way out
.................................................
Slowly slowly
the process begins
pain
hatred
fear
loneliness
love
jealousy
heartache
betrayal
all gone
the blood is draining
water fills her lungs
-darkness-
-silence-
all of a sudden
it's finally over
she is gone forever
no one can reach her anymore
and she's faded
slowly...........ever so slowly
into the black abyss
Copyright ©
Nyliah00
... [
2009-12-29 02:13:16]
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Re: Slowly........Slowly
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 03:55:05 AM AEST
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This is some write, i think it's really excellent.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Slowly........Slowly
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by ChaosFactor on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 08:48:34 AM AEST
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| This is truly breathtaking.. Very real. I love it. |
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