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While I went walking
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
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Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 01:33:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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While I went walking I found a girl
"Why do you cry, young one?" I asked
She looked at me, her eyes were glass
"Why doesn't God love me?" She said with a sob
I didn't answer, for I didn't know
I didn't know it then
But that girl was cursed a sad, sad life
A young demoness born from hell and hate
With a heart and soul as pure as snow
She loved all and wanted peace
Kindness
Happiness
Poor little demoness
Trapped in anguish
She spends her life helping
Caring
Angelic demon born so pure
Cursed to live a life of pain
Simply because of her birth
Karma seems reversed on her
And still she tries to help
Simple demon oh so sweet
God will not allow her to smile
Heart heavy but full of love
She bears so many scars
And yet cannot seem to stop
Loving all around her
Through all the hell she's put through
Still she brings warmth to those around her
Angelic Demon born of Darkness
Why, God, do you punish her?
Such a kindred spirit
So full of kindness
She doesn't deserve the pain you cause
Spare her, please
For you see I refuse to believe
In a God so cruel
As to continue hurting this girl
Just because of her birth
Can you not love her too?
She's lonely and sad
That pure-hearted demon
While I went walking
I came across a grave
Desicrated and overgrown
But still I recognized the name and cried
Oh angelic demon!
How I pray you finally
Found your salvation
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Re: While I went walking
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 03:04:05 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written with such depth so much in this poem |
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Re: While I went walking
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 09:17:35 AM AEST
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WOW beautiful write so deep it speaks
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