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I miss you
Contributed by
chimney21
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Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 04:33:23 PM in AEST
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I cannot sleep
and i know why
every hour i wake up and cry.
When you left
my heart fell to the floor
and i watched my sister
run to the door.
When i walked in the room
and seen you there
I burst into tears
and thought it was unfair
Now that your gone
I know your in a better place.
I'll just take it one day at a time
til i see your happy face.
Wherever you are,
Wherever you'll be.
Remember to smile
and think of me.
Copyright ©
chimney21
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2009-12-28 16:33:23]
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Re: I miss you
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 05:16:45 PM AEST
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Very sweet even tho it's sad.
So sorry for your loss. I can relate.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: I miss you
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 06:10:10 PM AEST
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I am sure your grandma is looking down and smiling at you..
This was a lovely write. I hope the pain eases for you...
Welcome to YPDC...and do have a Happy 2010..
Jenni |
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Re: I miss you
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 09:18:22 PM AEST
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very sad when you lose someone close.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: I miss you
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 10:18:08 AM AEST
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Very beautiful and sad poem. I share you feelings.
It's always really painful when you lose someone you love.
Take care.
Alexa. |
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Re: I miss you
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 11:55:15 PM AEST
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That was really deep and sad .. i felt it .. and i really liked it ..
sorry for your loss hope things turn out in a better way for you .. |
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Re: I miss you
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by chimney21 on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 02:05:35 AM AEST
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