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In An Instant
Contributed by
rfburn
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Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 06:36:20 AM in AEST
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An empty room,
In front of a window,
In an instant you grew old.
You chose not to know,
You chose not to see,
You wouldn’t believe what you were told.
But time fooled you,
It tricked you,
It never gave a care!
An empty room,
In front of the window,
Now all you do is stare.
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rfburn
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2009-12-28 06:36:20]
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Re: In An Instant
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 07:18:25 AM AEST
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Yes where does time go, i really like this sad in many ways, well written.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: In An Instant
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by shanat on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 02:50:09 PM AEST
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too right, ive only just hit my 30`s and i feel like time is flying away!!!
great stuff mate keep it up.
shanat:)) |
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