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My Name is May.....
Contributed by
karinagutierrez121
on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 10:43:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My name is May.
I am but six.
And my murder goes like this;
One day when I was playing all alone,my daddy came home
yelling in frustration at mom.He hit mommy;
knocked her out cold.He came to me and threw my
teddy out the window.I was afraid to speak,so I just stuck with..
"daddy,please dont hurt me".He heard a noise coming from the hall
it was mommy..trying to make a call.He was angry and went after her.
I ran away and locked myself in my room.I peeked out and saw daddy creeping up on mom
I wanted to be a hero and warn but I was afraid daddy would come.
So I sat and plugged my ears so I wouldnt have to hear her scream.
But before I knew it daddy was right beside of me with mommies' ring.
He looked at me and threw me down..I tried not to make a sound
but there was just so much pain.He put the gun to my head and within a bang I was dead.
My name is May..I am but six..and last night daddy found the perfect way to murder his
own kid.
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2009-12-27 22:43:42]
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Re: My Name is May.....
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 05:44:32 AM AEST
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Wow! This is a truly astounding piece of writing.
It is so powerful, it almost makes you feel numb.
An extremely good write Karina x
Star x x x |
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Re: My Name is May.....
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 12:05:02 AM AEST
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WOW ...
So Much Pain and sadness in there .. i felt it like i was in that situation of that little girl ..
i like the way u started i and the ending .. i salute you for this piece of work .. keep it up Karina :) |
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