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Finally
Contributed by
LisaTurpin
on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 09:38:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here I stand
Then everything is dying around me.
Here I bend
As everything is dying around me.
Here I sit
with my feet up to my chest,
As everything is dying around me.
Here I lie.
As everything is dead.
I throw my arms out, and disappear.
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LisaTurpin
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2009-12-27 21:38:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Finally
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fuzzy on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 12:51:22 AM AEST (User
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very sad, very good, nice write
Take care
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Re: Finally
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 06:04:42 AM AEST (User
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I can feel the emptiness exuding from your words.
Extremely sad, touchingly written...
Star x x x |
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