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Chocolate Instead
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 09:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Open your eyes and look at me;
you might like what you see.
I'm wearing those pants hugging the curves of my legs;
I've even gone an hour without a nag.
I've curled my hair's sexy locks;
I put on thigh highs instead of socks.
I am looking at you with my green eyes;
I am pressing against you when the sun rises.
I guess I will have to satisfy my wants
with chocolate instead.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-12-27 21:33:56]
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Re: Chocolate Instead
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 12:43:59 AM AEST
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I have known for years that women love chocolate. Just never knew quite why. Hmmmmm...veeeery interesting.
On another note, this is another one of those type of poems that can have different meanings...at least that is my humble opinion.
Very nicely done. Love the imagery!!!
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Chocolate Instead
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 06:16:43 AM AEST
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How often we go to so much effort for the one we love the most,
and yet we still end up stuck with the chocolate box!
Certainly not the sweet treat we were thinking of!
What is wrong with these men, are they blind? (Well clearly Tim isn't) lol!!!
Lovely write x
Star x x x
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