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Facets of the Heart
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 06:45:08 PM in AEST
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Facets of the Heart
The heart in the most precious faceted gem
I cast a shadow on your facets when I attempted to reflect from all of them
It took the words of someone that I did not know
To make clear in which direction I needed to go
Realizing that your heart is not fully mine
I was waiting for a different type of sign
To keep you close so from me you do not run
I must pinpoint my attention from all the facets to only one
This is what you are willing to share with me
This is where the connection for us is to be
The other facets are for others to shine and reflect
This is how it is to be and your wishes I will respect
Deadwriter
12/26/2009
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Re: Facets of the Heart
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 07:10:41 PM AEST
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Very interesting write..... nicely written too...
Hope your Christmas was lovely...
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Re: Facets of the Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 08:16:05 PM AEST
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I really like the way you analyzed feelings of the heart within a poetic setting.
Sometime we just have to give 'em time, don't we?
Nicely done,
Tim
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Re: Facets of the Heart
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 09:06:34 PM AEST
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I love this. It speaks volumes of truth in only a few stanzas. Love means giving space to someone when they need it. It is hard when one is in true love though. Great poem!
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Re: Facets of the Heart
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 06:32:31 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful.
I really love the way you have used the facets of a gem
to describe the reflections you are talking of so passionately.
Graciously penned x
Really, really nice!
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