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love last breath
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 12:32:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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~love last breath~
new born love as old lay slain
upon the ground left to bleed
i'ts last breath for you now
tell another as you once did
me of love so deep true that
you shall be forever just as
once for me you held in your
arms forever never another
could take my place but
now lay slain bleeding
love it's last breath
~love last breath~
Copyright ©
Fuzzy
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2009-12-27 00:32:10]
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Re: love last breath
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 04:00:22 AM AEST
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A really lovely write Fuzzy x
Thankyou....
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Re: love last breath
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by longhaircg on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 06:52:10 AM AEST
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nice writing fuzzy I really liked this
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Re: love last breath
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 10:36:20 AM AEST
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Not that I'm speachless, I'm just breathless. Your poem is amazing. Really loved it. Muchas Gracias.
Take Care
Alexa. |
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