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BLUE MOON
Contributed by
daylynn_van_wyk
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Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:30:29 PM in AEST
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The moon; bringer of darkness
a blue realm beyond,
an omen of fear
cuddling serenity in wise heart,
naive souls gaze in the depths
of blindness and ignorance
which surfaces in pure heart,
some seek darker paths
others cling to the light
a collision nears
in the unseen parallels,
heroes and villains born
love and war tangos in the night...
under the innocents
of the mysterious moonlight.
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daylynn_van_wyk
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2009-12-26 23:30:29]
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Re: BLUE MOON
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:33:15 PM AEST
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I really like this.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: BLUE MOON
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by NewGuy on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:44:32 PM AEST
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| this has an oddly familar feel to it. Nice job |
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Re: BLUE MOON
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 04:11:24 AM AEST
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This is beautiful Daylynn x
I enjoyed the this part especially:-
"an omen of fear
cuddling serenity in wise heart,
naive souls gaze in the depths
of blindness and ignorance
which surfaces in pure heart"
Very nicely written, well done!
Star x x x
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Re: BLUE MOON
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by eternalsunshine on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 07:22:12 PM AEST
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your words are like the ying yang!!!
love it... |
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Re: BLUE MOON
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by lnnie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 04:41:26 PM AEST
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Thanks for the comment on Moonlight Ballet. Love you piece here blue moon, If ever mood and content were wed, you have done it here.
Great piece. It is tangible. |
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