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Without You
Contributed by
KeyboardPlayer
on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 07:04:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Time seems a lot longer
I always feel blue
My life is more different
When I’m not with you
I don’t feel right
I don’t feel wrong
It’s all very confusing
When you’re just gone
Night after night
I dream about you
Peacefully and undisturbed
Hoping that I’ll never wake up
I wonder if you think about me
Thinking the way I do
Repeatedly and continually
When I’m not with you
My life is like a jigsaw puzzle
Being solved as time goes
A hollow spot in the puzzle
Chasing an unattainable piece
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Re: Without You
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by iiloveyouxx19 on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 07:16:28 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. exactly how i feel when me and my boyfriend cannot see each other for a while. Keep writing :) |
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Re: Without You
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by longhaircg on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 08:20:13 PM AEST
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quote; a hollow spot in the puzzle chasing an unatainable piece,
I loved this write, all the way through
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