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Hidden Treasure
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 01:21:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I endeavour
For hidden treasure
Deep beneath a wave
So tall and strong
Through antiphon
Of music, only mer-folk brave
Diving deep
Past caverns steep
The moonlight but a glimmer
Yet through the dark
A gold laced heart
Shall guide me with it's shimmer
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Re: Hidden Treasure
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by longhaircg on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 01:50:48 PM AEST
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beautiful I love this I truely see and feel every word
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Re: Hidden Treasure
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 06:05:23 PM AEST
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B-E-A-U...beautiful!!!! I found this quite captivating and the imagery/metaphor is great. Short, sweet, inspirational, exquisite!!!
Tim
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Re: Hidden Treasure
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by NewGuy on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:11:47 PM AEST
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| clever, i enjoyed it, thank you |
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Re: Hidden Treasure
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:26:30 PM AEST
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| i think you surpassed yourself with this one lisa x |
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Re: Hidden Treasure
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:30:56 PM AEST
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beautiful write love this.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Hidden Treasure
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by ChaosFactor on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 08:45:31 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful. |
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Re: Hidden Treasure
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 04:23:00 AM AEST
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The music box like a magical tune
to your heart,conquering darkness and fear
places that many wouldn't go
The treasure found within
so deeply profound,my soul quivers
This piece defines awe
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Re: Hidden Treasure
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th January 2010 @ 09:49:44 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. I especially liked this bit:
'So tall and strong
Through antiphon
Of music, only mer-folk brave'
Good work!
-Phil |
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