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Prisoner of Sane
Contributed by
Angelfox
on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 12:15:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Rust in cuffs
full of
mold of old
Congested hands hold
worlds' undigested souls.
Single short chain claims
both cuffs in there place.
They are ready to break.
Prisoner of sane.
Impatient is the rain
that caused the
Rust in cuffs
that are full of
mold of old.
Copyright ©
Angelfox
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2009-12-26 12:15:33]
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Re: Prisoner of Sane
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 01:31:49 PM AEST
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This is an intriguing poem!
Surreal it maybe, but there's something about
it that I can't quite put my finger on..... and I don't mean the obvious.
This one has really got me thinking!
I really like it.
Star x x x |
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Re: Prisoner of Sane
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by NewGuy on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:14:59 PM AEST
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| i agree. there is just something there. well done |
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