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filial
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 25th December 2009 @ 07:40:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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one
windows open
too the we of me
three essential cells
for blood counts
five auspicious rings
six missed calls
seventh maid in
a la la locked vault
ate the life of
WOMAN
you two
we'd known
each other
a long
time.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-12-25 19:40:43]
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Re: filial
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 25th December 2009 @ 09:02:55 PM AEST
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I like it, but i always like your work.
keep it up. |
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Re: filial
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:57:10 AM AEST
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Very clever, well done...
Star x x x |
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