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God I'm Sorry
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 05:31:15 AM in AEST
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And what a Christmas Eve it has been so far, I was going to bed but then I got the message...then I was up all night
I'll be ok
I laid here awake
I started to shake
And then I got the news
I didn’t know what to do
I wish I was talking to someone, to tell me it’s not true
I did cry
I don’t even know why
I wish I could just not know
But at the same I ask why
If I could I would try to make it change
But that would make me deranged
But now I cry
I lay here awake
My whole body shakes
God I’m sorry
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2009-12-24 05:31:15]
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Re: God I'm Sorry
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 05:45:23 AM AEST
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A great deal of imagery has been created here. My head is a whirl with possibilities...
I even find myself feeling sorry too x
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Re: God I'm Sorry
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by karoody on
Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 02:16:10 PM AEST
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Kelly~
If you need to talk, you know I am here
Huge hugs and smiles
Take care
Great write, look forward to reading more
Kara
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