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Just As Breakable As Glass
Contributed by
Jammy
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Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 11:28:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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See this smile?
It's as real as your friendship.
And that's not saying much.
I fell for you
But you weren't there to catch me.
I was like glass.
And when I fell,
I broke into a million pieces.
I've spread across the ground
trying to blend in.
And it must be working.
Because people are walking all over me.
Not caring that each step is crushing me into smaller pieces.
I just need someone to come along
and sweep me up.
To save me from the world.
To put me back together again..
Until then,
This 'smile' will be plastered across my face.
Just like your 'friendship' is plastered across my heart.
Copyright ©
Jammy
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2009-12-23 23:28:03]
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Re: Just As Breakable As Glass
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on
Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 12:34:25 AM AEST
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Think it's a good write
Take care.
Not caring that each step is crushing me into smaller pieces.
I just need someone to come along
and sweep me up.
To save me from the world.
To put me back together again.. |
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Re: Just As Breakable As Glass
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 02:45:36 AM AEST
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I like the way you've written this,
it is descriiptive & longing for peace of mind.
Star x x x
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Re: Just As Breakable As Glass
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by djs on
Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 04:27:08 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed your poem. Especially this part -
And when I fell,
I broke into a million pieces.
I've spread across the ground
trying to blend in.
And it must be working.
Because people are walking all over me
very emotional, very real. Thank you for sharing your pain.
djs |
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Re: Just As Breakable As Glass
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 12:15:06 AM AEST
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very sad and very impressive ..
i liked the last part starting ( this smile will be ...) down to (plastered across my heart)
i think it kinda speaks out what is within me ..
keep it up Jammy :) |
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