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YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN MY EVERYTHING
Contributed by
STAR69
on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 06:50:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN MY EVERYTHING BUT SUDDELNY SOMETHING CHANGE
IDEAS POPPED IN MY HEAD SUDDENLY MY MIND REARRANGED.
THINKING THAT YOU LOVED ME
THINKING YOU WHERE ALWAYS THERE
THINKING OF IT NOW YOU NEVER SHOWED AFFECTION IN HOW MUCH YOU REALLY CARED
I HAVE NO CHOICE TO LEAVE AND START ALL OVER I WOULD
INSTEAD OF EVERYTHING BEING ALL BAD EVERYTHING WLL BE ALLL GOOD
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STAR69
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2009-12-23 18:50:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: YOU HAVE ALWAYS BEEN MY EVERYTHING
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jammy on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 11:34:39 PM AEST (User
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Nicely written :)
just a little tip though, Try and refrain from using CAPLOCKS as it takes away from the poem.
Hope All Goes well.
~Janet~ |
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