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beautiful pain
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 06:26:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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so deep in my heart I feel you tearing apart,
the love you showed was lost to the dark,
they never realized the tears that were shed,
so deep the brake you wish you were dead.
a love so sweet so deep and true
is always a blessing for you,
I know your blinded by hurt and pain,
around you theres nothing but clouds and rain,
the sun is still shining the sky is still blue,
for the ones that love from deep within,
will always win and live to love again.
give it away freely, for this is not a sin.
Copyright ©
longhaircg
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2009-12-23 18:26:37]
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Re: beautiful pain
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by fallensaint on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 10:07:18 PM AEST
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wow!!!! this write was amazing!
i really enjoyed it!
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Re: beautiful pain
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 06:05:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful pain, beautifully written x
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Re: beautiful pain
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 09:37:38 PM AEST
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lovely very well written
Take care
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