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The Gun In My Mouth
Contributed by
fallensaint
on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 05:44:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The gun in my mouth
Is bitter in taste
If I pull the trigger
My life shall be erased
No more pain
Or a broken heart
It seems like death
Is a fresh new start
Each gasp for breath
Brings me pain
It's complete agony
It courses through my veins
I gasp for air
I need you here
Stop me please
Save me from the fear
It's taking hold
Breaking me apart
I tear at my flesh
And rip out my heart
I look in relief
At the bloody pieces
What's left of my heart
And my breathing ceases
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fallensaint
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2009-12-23 17:44:41]
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Re: The Gun In My Mouth
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by KarinaGutierrez121 on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 05:50:41 PM AEST
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| I like this one a lot. |
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Re: The Gun In My Mouth
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 05:54:55 PM AEST
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WOW, awsome writing,
sp |
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Re: The Gun In My Mouth
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 11:01:04 PM AEST
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some write well written.
Take care.
It's taking hold
Breaking me apart
I tear at my flesh
And rip out my heart |
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Re: The Gun In My Mouth
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by AshlenaAres on
Monday, 25th January 2010 @ 05:55:10 AM AEST
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♥
I need you here
Stop me please.♥
If I were to pull the trigger, I wouldnt feel it.
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