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passion for pain
Contributed by
Fuzzy
on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 01:46:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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~passion for pain~
The hate that now you feel
like a passion your love never
was true as your eyes that lie
with look of evil that dwells
behind your smile in your
distorted mind you search
for pain to give to please
the vengance you crave
so much for your selfish
pride only for you to cry
for more pain to satisfy
your need to hurt for the
pleasure you seek pain
of others
~passion for pain~
~
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Fuzzy
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2009-12-23 13:46:27]
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Re: passion for pain
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 05:12:56 PM AEST
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good write,
sp |
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Re: passion for pain
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by fallensaint on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 10:10:47 PM AEST
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great write.
i really liked it
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Re: passion for pain
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 11:10:51 PM AEST
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| of evil that dwells behind your smile! there is nothing worse than a false smile hiding evil or deceit, I get a picture of an animal hunting down its prey in this poem very effective! well written |
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Re: passion for pain
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by BONEZ on
Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 06:24:51 PM AEST
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| been there many a time... beautiful poem |
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