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Frozen
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 07:36:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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~Frozen~
Took my heart crushed like ice
now lay frozen lost in time
will never warm the blood
now cold frozen in this
man now lost searching
deep inside his soul for
the ghost of love now
lost in time once mine
to cherish now gone
forever my soul now
frozen like a picture
just to hang forever
~Frozen~
Copyright ©
Fuzzy
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2009-12-23 07:36:56]
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Re: Frozen
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 08:03:12 AM AEST
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IHi Fuzzy,
I love the way you've wrapped your words
within themselves, using mirror imagery.
A very nice write poppet x
Star x x x |
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Re: Frozen
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 10:25:45 AM AEST
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I liked this read frozen, like forever printed on our heart
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