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Long and Lonely Path
Contributed by
XslainhopeX
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Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 03:45:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Spending all these years on this long and lonely path
Not knowing where I'm going, not knowing where I'm at
All these lonely years with no one by my side
Wondering if anyone would notice if I lived or if I died
On this deep, dark path bearing no place to go
Holding one person close to my heart, more then she'll ever know
Spending all these years living with my past
Trying to forget it now, trying to forget it fast.
The past comes back to haunt me
From time to time i find
To realize its just the past
And I need to leave it all behind
Spending all these years on this long and lonely street
Wondering when our paths will cross, wondering when they'll meet
I walk through my life wondering, if its worth saving or letting go
In the end i just tell myself, time can only show.
So i keep on going down this long and lonely path
Till i reach the time where my life comes to and end
And our paths have crossed and i have a eternal friend
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Re: Long and Lonely Path
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 07:42:13 AM AEST
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Well written.
Take care
I walk through my life wondering, if its worth saving or letting go
In the end i just tell myself, time can only show.
So i keep on going down this long and lonely path
Till i reach the time where my life comes to and end
And our paths have crossed and i have a eternal friend
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Re: Long and Lonely Path
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 07:49:01 AM AEST
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This is so nicely written, full of heartache,
but still hope lies within its words.
Well done
Star x x x
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Re: Long and Lonely Path
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 24th December 2009 @ 01:17:23 AM AEST
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Nicely written
Often we never know where we are or where we are going until we get there, so it is good you found a friend to was the way with you
each day you walk the path remember one thing
Carpe diem, but I'm guessing you know that
Anyways Great write
hope to read more soon
-Voice
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