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My Love
Contributed by
karinagutierrez121
on
Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 09:33:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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By June i'm gone.
Keep moving on,not fast but slowly.
I found my love here online,when I was terribly lonely.
But,I'm not sure if it was really true.
Then again,maybe it was cuz all I thought about was you.
I'll always be in love,it was more than a crush.
My love help me out of this bitter mess,you'll never guess whatd I do for you.
Can you hear me calling from thousands of other rooms that you have my heart locked into?
I hope you love me like I love you.
My love,your smile brightened up the darkest rooms.
But our love isnt going well,this distance is tearing me apart.
I hate the way you lie to me and say youre in love..
When you walk around the streets and pretend youre alone.
I'm sorry my love..I truly am,I guess I shouldve known.
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karinagutierrez121
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2009-12-22 09:33:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by JakerBaker88 on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 11:51:06 PM AEST (User
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Nicely done here. I felt your pain and anguish. The best line was, "Can you hear me calling from thousands of other rooms that you have my heart locked into?" I hope you post some more poetry on here. From what I've seen, you're very good. |
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