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Forced to wait
Contributed by
migueltapiajr
on
Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 12:01:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't become what I want to be
as if something suffocates the inspiration or will to be,
so sad yet so much willingness to have no desires being--
everything I have pinned on hopes and dreams,
that I just leave them as dreams that i don't even hope to see,
when its all, all a game,
everything is all a game
a bad one I hate to play..
but a bad one I'm forced to face!
silence of a dud I'm hopping life's merciful with less time granted,
for the amount of time you are forced to wait..
imagine? all for what?
anxious at the beginning
lethargic at the end,
for all the little effort that ends up being lessness
and these are accomplishments you gain?...
win or wait, play crooked or straight
you lose by the rules and lose cheating the race...
I have no hopes, or dreams...or
anything that sounds unseen
upsceen, mean or keen..
I hate the idea that I actually--
took my first breath, and continued to breathe...
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Re: Forced to wait
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 04:00:29 AM AEST (User
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You've used very powerful words here...
"I hate the idea that I actually-- took my first breath,
and continued to breathe..."
This was a sad read, almost contrite even...
Star x x x |
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