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I wont
Contributed by
ToxicityOfTheCity
on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 10:10:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Kick me when I’m down
Eyelids droop behind heavy curtains
Muscles twitch, I have no control
Tell me to stop, but I wont
I can’t be under your laws
Limits fence me in
I’m down and out
Weaved in and out of reality
Time to grown up, time to kill my softer side
Dirty pennies and blood
Stab wounds and hugs
I swear, I’ll nail you down
Be my savior, my bleeding lamb
My greatest sin and biggest fan
On the other side, always thinking of mirages
Flits of light and space, self-serving breakdown
Inky darkness and cold hard stones
Lie down and never wake up
I found myself in your back pocket
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ToxicityOfTheCity
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2009-12-21 22:10:17]
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Re: I wont
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 03:26:29 AM AEST
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Well I must say!
It is indeed dark, & I find much that it wrestles
with the conscience! I particularly found the lines:-
"Inky darkness and cold hard stones,
Lie down and never wake up, I found myself
in your back pocket" - very intruiging! This is such
a great description of being/feeling trapped....
Well done Tox, fab write in my opinion!
Star x x x |
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Re: I wont
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by angelfreak on
Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 08:45:59 AM AEST
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| Deep and dark. I can definitely relate with the struggles. Great write! |
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