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Love Never Dies..!
Contributed by
Anu
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Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 11:29:34 AM in AEST
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Breathing lightly and peacefully in her shiny mirror palace,
Gazing out the stretch of blue and green from her window pane..
She was alone, living in her own exquisite wonderland,
Perplexed with mixed emotions flowing like sand..!
Wondering to herself if the world out there was real or fake,
When suddenly someone knocked and her thoughts gave a shake..!
He dint had a blue-blood but some charisma in his eyes,
Which made her hooked to his stunning face for a while..!
Blood gushing, she felt her heart beating for the first time,
And had never felt this insane feeling of being alive..!
She realized that she was in love, which was pure and divine,
And thanked God for making her life worthwhile..!
When others cognized his blood and that he wasn’t a patrician of their kind,
Arrows and stones flooded on the door when they all went out of their minds..!
The two became helpless in front of the countless mad populace,
Being together gave them strength and solace…!
She stood in his arms, till the end of their lives,
Was shot by arrows, blood dispersed, but love never died..!
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Re: Love Never Dies..!
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by longhaircg on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 11:35:55 AM AEST
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was shot by arrows, blood dispersed, but love never died,
WOW this is so wonderfully alive
beautifully written
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Re: Love Never Dies..!
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by Vishy on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 11:56:42 PM AEST
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| As in alphabetical order S comes after L.,Sacrifice is redound to replace Love. Sacrifice strikes different people with different blows; One of the instances have been beautifully carved by the poet |
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Re: Love Never Dies..!
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by Vishy on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 11:57:53 PM AEST
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| As in alphabetical order S comes after L.,Sacrifice is redound to replace Love. Sacrifice strikes different people with different blows; One of the instances have been beautifully carved by the poet |
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Re: Love Never Dies..!
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by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 07:00:21 AM AEST
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So full of passion and plight....
Very well scribed!
Star x x x |
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