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Like a Sudden Rain
Contributed by
fallensaint
on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 10:14:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I stand and watch
As my life falls away
Slowly and gracefully
Day by day
The broken heart
That I tried to mend
Has shattered apart
And met it's end
I feel alone and scared
At least hold me
Tell me it's all ok
Help me to be free
I need you to care
Understand my pain
As I feel it hit me
Like a sudden rain
It's torment
I can't take it anymore
I put the gun in my mouth
And death knocks at my door
Copyright ©
fallensaint
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2009-12-21 10:14:49]
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Re: Like a Sudden Rain
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 11:28:42 AM AEST
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Geez! this is a pretty tough write.
I liked it.....
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Re: Like a Sudden Rain
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by longhaircg on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 11:50:44 AM AEST
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quote, I need you to care, understand my pain,
as I feel it hit me like sudden rain.
wow, I feel your pain deep in me as I read your words, quote: I feel alone and scared at least hold me,
oh my heart is there, and I do care.
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Re: Like a Sudden Rain
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by ChaosFactor on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 08:25:42 AM AEST
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| I really understand the emotion in this.. |
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Re: Like a Sudden Rain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th January 2010 @ 11:17:45 AM AEST
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In this society we have this morbid fascination with death
and this inherent fixation on despair and self pitty
some in inspiration,some in obsession but the fruit
never falls too far from the tree
common but exciting write
-D.Truth |
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