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my heart
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 09:35:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart is like a tornado
Swirling and tossing
In this never ending pain
Pain of not knowing
If you ever loved me
My heart keeps turning
In the ruble that we made
Finding memories that you left
Leaving it for me
To sort in vain
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eternalsunshine
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2009-12-21 09:35:07]
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Re: my heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 09:46:40 AM AEST
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This write was heart felt
Love can be beautifully chaotic
The pain is enough to leave you helpless
But the bliss is worth the chances we take
Your metaphors are enlightening
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Re: my heart
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 01:26:40 PM AEST
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I liked this alot.
So full of torment and heartache
a very well written piece....
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