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Frozen Butterfly
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 09:42:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Crystalized wings fly;
frozen powder weighing down,
descending to death
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-12-20 21:42:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Frozen Butterfly
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 01:37:39 PM AEST (User
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Hi
What's it doing out in the snow, for goodness sake??
Your haiku once again captures all the emotion
and drama so succinctly! Well written!
Tommy
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