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Your Eyes
Contributed by
spaceotter
on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 01:37:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I walk through the caverns of your eyes,
I see the many candles that fuel your soul.
Now I kneel before you and ask to light my
own.
I swim in the pools of your eyes.
And see the many gems that make them
sparkle so.
Now I kneel before you and offer a gem of my
own.
I'm lost in the universe of your eyes.
I see the many suns that fuel your mind.
Now I kneel before you and offer suns of my
own.
I'm drunk with the promise of your eyes.
I see the love that springs from your soul.
Now I kneel before you and give love of my
own.
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spaceotter
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Re: Your Eyes
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 01:47:26 PM AEST
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What a wonderful sentiment... an equal love... this is beautiful!
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Re: Your Eyes
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 05:20:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful, romantic poem of mutual love. I love this
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Re: Your Eyes
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 08:07:37 PM AEST
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As the ocean is never full of water, so is the heart never full of love.
you sound hopelessly in love!
beautiful write.
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Re: Your Eyes
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by fancyface4898 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:28:39 PM AEST
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| That is such a sweet poem. You really know how to touch a persons heart |
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Re: Your Eyes
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 05:59:32 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful
I really enjoyed this beautiful expression
of your love Adam, Thanks for sharing
this one, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Your Eyes
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by angelrae on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 07:23:43 AM AEST
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| A beautiful poem of love. The eyes tell deep secrets into our soul. Thank you for touching my heart. |
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