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in the heaven

Contributed by praz on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 05:08:34 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i want to see your eyes,
before leaving the world,
i want to see your smile,
before leaving the world,
you hold my hand,
just like before,
because i have a fear,
i will be alone,
in the heaven,
forgive me for all fights,
before leaving the world,
i don't want to see melting eyes,
before leaving the world,
you kiss my head,
because i have fear,
i will be alone,
in the heaven,
its time to knock the door,
which you cant see,
its time to leave the heart,
forever and free,
beyond all horizons,
there is peace and love,
but i am alone,
here in the heaven,
i am missing your eyes,
after leaving the world,
i am missing your smile,
after leaving the world,
i am sending my love,
just like before,
now you are alone,
because i know,
i am in heaven,
i am in heaven...........

Copyright © praz ... [ 2009-12-20 05:08:34]
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Re: in the heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 06:13:07 AM AEST
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So beautiful..... this brought a tear to my eye.
a very emotional & heavy hearted piece. sincerely written....
Star x x x

Re: in the heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by cindyhawkins on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 09:53:05 AM AEST
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beautifully written.. sometimes we leave it too late to tell the person we love and care about our thoughts... made me think and cry!
cindy x

Re: in the heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 10:17:38 AM AEST
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Beautiful and well written..

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