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To Watch The Sunset
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 04:33:47 AM in AEST
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x x x
At lapping froth of ocean's edge
I fall to the sand with baited breath
To watch the sunset's fading light
As she falls off the earth, to make way for the night
With heart in my mouth, my soul is at peace
This moment I pray, to never cease
The warm breeze breathes comfort upon the shore
As I bathe in celestial beauty, with awe
x x x
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Re: To Watch The Sunset
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 07:19:58 AM AEST
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| transported to another world with this one short and sweet beautifully complete nice one xx |
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Re: To Watch The Sunset
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 07:47:31 AM AEST
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Nice !!!!!  |
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Re: To Watch The Sunset
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by cindyhawkins on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 09:46:43 AM AEST
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| lovely x |
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Re: To Watch The Sunset
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 10:13:36 AM AEST
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Well that warmed up a frosty day, nice write.
Take care |
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Re: To Watch The Sunset
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 05:09:28 PM AEST
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A lovely piece this is, akin to a hushed
dream one never wants to wake up
from . . .
thank you likewise . . .
Ben |
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Re: To Watch The Sunset
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 04:48:59 AM AEST
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Sunset on the beach
what a wonder to see
I truly was there through your words
Could smell the ocean feel the breeze
And the tears a beautiful sunset brings
Very inspirational
-D.Truth |
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Re: To Watch The Sunset
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 05:38:06 PM AEST
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| Very descriptive one can almost feel the ocean spray warm sand and see the sinking sun.You have a way with words. I enjoyed. |
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