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pulse. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 02:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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luna. . .
have you smitten me?
your craggy cosmos, bechoing
you're due this dropless tear
upon the face of longing
simple & austere
embrace the emptiness, within
embrace, release
the melody
silken words of sanity
release me to a kinder state
lingering. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-12-19 14:07:13]
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Re: pulse. . .
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 09:37:00 PM AEST
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I would be a liar if I said I always knew exactly what you meant when you write dearest Elle, however, I absolutely know for sure they are always a thoroughly enjoyable read and very very intriguing.
I loooooove this line:
silken words of sanity
release me to a kinder state
The yearning!!!
You are brilliant.
Tim
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Re: pulse. . .
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 04:43:07 AM AEST
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Tim is so right here!
This is such a beautiful piece of poetry, and
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.....
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