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Sir Hollow Bastion
Contributed by
XslainhopeX
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Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 10:50:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sir Hollow Bastion so envy with grief
I cant stay too long so I will make this brief
Everywhere you turn there is trouble right behind you
But i think the whole time you knew
You find their weaknesses and you take them down
If you do not finish them off you would get your hounds
After you destroy them and take their land
You would have all of their people working at your commands
Sir Hollow Bastion I give you your sword and shield
When you defeat your the enemy, you will gain control of their fields
You will train your enemy's armies and they will attack
When you were in battle you were stabbed in the back
Your men turned on you like savages and you were killed
Now you are in the ground and your people feel no guilt
The reason i have came to talk to you
I have taken over your armies and your enemies too
After we killed your enemies and I killed your men
I felt like we both had to win
Now I am the leader of all of the lands
And I have all of mankind working only on my commandss
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Re: Sir Hollow Bastion
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 11:20:42 AM AEST
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I absolutely love this!
So dark and masterful. such a great dark write.
Star x x x |
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Re: Sir Hollow Bastion
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 01:20:27 PM AEST
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Well written.
Take care |
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