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night after her death

Contributed by praz on Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 03:02:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

sheets without colors, and dry brushes,
shinning mirror in front of me,
which reflect memories of her,
the fragrance of flowers start dissolving in air,
because the soul of her is no more there,
I remembered that long curly hair waves on her chin,
but after hearing this news it makes me sick,
and the air I breathe sings me,
that she is gone,
and now with this very hand,
I can't stop her soul,
oh why god you took her away,
from this time now,
my life turns to grey, I lost everything,
I take a walk outside,
and visit all places,
where we used to meet,
I can feel the words that we said,
but now they are faded,
but our love is safe in my broken heart,
I am writing all the feelings,
and the love right on my loving soul,
and now my stupid friends laughing over me,
they would not understand,
the love I had, is not burned away with her,
it melted everything,
now she is gone away,
turn my world to grey,
all the moments I lived,
will fade away from my view,
I want to sleep in this paining night,
because every second her scream strikes,
I know again the sun will rise,
but what about the moon that I lost last night,
what a pain it is, I can't bear this pain........................

Copyright © praz ... [ 2009-12-19 03:02:17]
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Re: night after her death (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 10:49:12 AM AEST
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this was felted deeply by me, your writing is becoming clearer as you go, keep writing,
sp

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