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Dead inside
Contributed by
fallensaint
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Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 06:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The blade
It stings
As it tears across flesh
My dying soul sings
A stab to my heart
A wound that won't heal
Death by love
I never thought it was real
It's killing me
A slow and painful death
Love tore me apart
And extinguished my last breath
I'm dead inside
An empty shell
I am lost forever
Burning in hell
But don't say sorry
Or give me excuses
You have shown me
I am entirely useless
Copyright ©
fallensaint
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2009-12-18 18:16:16]
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Re: Dead inside
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by inkmaster on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 08:42:32 PM AEST
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Nice write,
writen from the heart I liked it ....
~Inkamster~ |
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Re: Dead inside
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 09:12:24 PM AEST
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I've said all I have to say to you about the blade,
the red pen of pain we call it cutting on your skin
but you aren't useless not at all, what you feel and what is true are to different things, you're not useless, if you were aaron wouldn't have wasted time even opening my door to yell at you, he yelled because he cared and that should show you you're not useless
all the same Great poem
hope to read more soon
-Kelly |
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Re: Dead inside
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by rfburn on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 05:20:32 AM AEST
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| Wow Dude. Don't take it so hard. You'll find another one. |
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Re: Dead inside
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by Taizy_May520 on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 07:54:13 PM AEST
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| Very powerful! I loved it! |
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Re: Dead inside
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by SilentMuse on
Saturday, 26th December 2009 @ 11:47:22 AM AEST
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| You are not useless, you have good friends, you fill a space in are hearts and lives no one else can, if nothing else, remeber that |
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