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Fly Little Bird
Contributed by
laststarontheleft
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Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 09:22:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Fly little bird
High into the sky
Your white light is waiting
No more need to cry
No pain shall you suffer
Nothing more to endure
You won't be forgotten
A soul peaceful and pure
Your eyes will still sparkle
And song still be heard
Your white light is waiting
Now, fly little bird
x x x
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 10:14:07 AM AEST
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Very nice, a work of art, well done. I enjoyed the read.
The Phantom |
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by northernlights on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 11:17:12 AM AEST
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| beautiful write heart felt and peaceful x |
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 11:30:28 AM AEST
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A charming, lovely write.
-Phil |
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 11:48:55 AM AEST
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Your compassion for innocence
Is mesmerizing
We are often set a ease knowing
our loved one's will fly towards that light
This write is warm and comforting
-D.Truth |
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 12:50:22 PM AEST
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What a lovely poem, enjoyed this very much
Take care. |
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by blumentopf on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 09:43:17 AM AEST
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Heartwrenching poem sweet6 friend. Remnds me of my dear husband Stephen from Northumberland and Yorkshire, before
I closed his eyes and he took off into the white light.
Thanks for composinhg and sharig. Blessed Christmas and healthy happy ew Year.
http://home.att.net/~e.dandy/index.Elizabeth.Dandy.html
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 10:48:55 AM AEST
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Sometimes death is a very difficult thing for us to accept. Even though it is inevitable, it can still be difficult. When my sister died I wanted to think that at least her suffering was over because obviously in this life it was. This would be a beautiful poem to dedicate to those who have suffered from a horrible death.
You delicately wrote an exquisite little piece with finesse and beauty. Very well done.
I wish I could be as positive as a thinker as you are.
Take care and thank you very much for an enjoyable read. You took sadness and made it beautiful.
Tim
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Re: Fly Little Bird
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by RuMPleStiLTSkiN on
Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 07:16:41 AM AEST
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so full of inspiration .. so peaceful ..
i like it :) |
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