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See in me, Be in me
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 10:20:25 PM in AEST
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oops
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See in me
Be in me
But I see so much
I see madness
I see my own sadness
I see what makes me me
But I see things I don't want to be
I'm alone here watching
Seeing all that I see
Being ashamed of the traits in me
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Re: See in me, Be in me
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 11:03:39 PM AEST
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Good write on self reflection, loved it start to finish....
The end though....... no do not be ashamed of yourself, rather work on things you wish to change, it is an ongoing process my friend, baby steps!!
Hugs you
Michelle |
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Re: See in me, Be in me
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by SilentMuse on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 11:35:24 PM AEST
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Never be ashamed of the traits you see
because everything you are
is everything I'd have you be
-Sarah |
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Re: See in me, Be in me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 12:06:35 AM AEST
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| Very nice write on self reflection, Kelly. I know we can be our own worse critics, however, perhaps it should also tell us that we can improve on what we do not like. |
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