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I AM FREE
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 07:17:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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why lies when truth is real, Do you have me here just lie to me,
why when truth is what I seek, not your secretes you keep.
so insult me constantly, play me for a fool, well dear the truth will always rule.
believe her lies in all her hate against me but thats OK because truth sets me free
I know someone is waiting at your gate. Its not glory where truth sets you free
its called purgatory a place for hate, thats your and her fate,
so laugh at me and create all the delusion between you and her
but for all the hurt and hate you throw at me seven folds be place upon you.
So do as you please say as you will,
in truth and faith I stand, I am free
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2009-12-17 07:17:24]
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Re: I AM FREE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 07:38:46 AM AEST
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There is nothing more profound
Truth will always prevail
Although there are night where the lies tear at my soul
The truth always sets us free
Even if we are the only ones who believe in it
Awesomly Powerful Nice write
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Re: I AM FREE
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by Fuzzy on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 09:45:14 AM AEST
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Well written
Take care
You can always get to the bottom of a thief but you can never get to the bottom of a liar. |
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Re: I AM FREE
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by Aspirant on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 06:00:47 AM AEST
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| Forgive me if I sound hostile but your poem sounds misguided to me. If you were truly set free I don't think you would need to talk about 7-fold revenge. Do others need to suffer for you to be free? Give it some thought, maybe you will find a less spiteful path to freedom. |
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