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The One
Contributed by
Funnygrl_03
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Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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At times I look at you and all I can see is someone standing in my shadows
Then there are times I look at you and see the man you want to be
When I look at you I see things like I never have before
Everytime I look at you I am loving you more and more
There are times that make me think are we ment to be?
But I always know we are when you look at me
You give me that look
You know that look, the one where you look me deep in the eyes and without a single word you let me know that everything is ok
Those are the best days
I hope that there are many more to come
Because I think you are the one
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2003-04-05 14:35:00]
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Re: The One
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by DunWonSonita on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 02:48:45 PM AEST
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I love it! I'm a definate fan of that piece! Please keep on writing, you've made a spark.
Hark! The angels sing, a poet is born. The world rejoices to see it happen. |
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Re: The One
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:13:12 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Funnygrl... Welcome to your poetry dot com.....
Jenni |
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Re: The One
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by Funnygrl_03 on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 11:41:07 PM AEST
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| thanks i am glad that u like it.. i have more stuff that i am going to submit i just have not had the time yet.. |
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